Talk:Jaw-Lock/@comment-72.47.160.7-20200515182253

Whom ever edited this has poor sentence structure. I get we all want to help and add in our own thing. But this has get to be comprehensive to the reader.

I've fixed the structure but CarolDuffield reread your work. Some of these sentences don't make since and need to be broken up. Not hating just trying to help you out.